Cast Out

The High Priest bowed his head as he completed his incantation, the last syllables of the spell drifting away on the wind as it swept through the roofless temple. For a moment, nothing happened. Just when Johnaan thought he might wake up from a terrible dream, the uplifted face of statue of the beloved Goddess Anthoaxa came alive. The normally static tattoos began to flow like water across the creamy-white marble skin as life entered the avatar. The head tilted forward and coal-black eyes opened to stare at his kneeling, manacled form.

When his eyes met hers, his blood chilled and the weight of the Universe fell on his shoulders. She entered his mind with the force of a tidal wave, crushing his consciousness and sweeping it into a forgotten corner of his mind, only to fill the void with glorious love for and absolute despair of the Goddess. He had never been under the gaze of the Goddess before and from what he heard from others, not only did you not want to be in her gaze, you were never the same once you were. Now he understood why. He was no longer a person of this world. Every fiber of his being, every thought and emotion was hers in the most absolute sense.

The mouth opened and a voice like an avalanche passed judgment on his trembling form. “You are now an Unliving. You are hereby banished; cast out to the Lifeless Void.”

As quickly as the avatar entered the statue and brought it to life, it left, sending the statue back to its stoic form. The tattoos once more fixed in place and the face lifted up to the heavens. Johnaan tried to will himself to move, to speak, but couldn’t break free from the prison in his mind the goddess locked him into. He was vaguely aware of the guard removing his bindings and lifting him to his feet. A canvas screen to his right was moved aside, revealing the majestic mountains leading to the Void. Once more, he tried to move his limbs but instead of obeying his commands, they carried his form toward the exit, compelled by the unseen power that kept him locked away within himself.

As he stepped out of the temple and into the sunlight, he remembered a chance encounter he had several months ago. He was drawing water from the well near the north gate when a blind beggar stumbled and fell a few feet away from him. He helped the beggar to his feet and obliged him a drink from his jug when asked. The beggar, in return, stared at him with milky eyes and told him that he would balance the scales between Heaven and Hell. Johnaan, thinking the beggar was crazy, smiled and thanked him for the thought and proceeded to gather his water jugs and carry them back to his hovel. After a dozen steps, he turned back toward the beggar but couldn’t find a trace of him.

The vision of that event dissolved back to the present. Was his crime of stealing bread to feed his starving children so horrific as to warrant banishment? People got lesser punishments for more serious crimes than his. Why was he being punished so harshly? As he struggled to comprehend what was happening as he walked down the Path of the Unforgiven, he pictured his children’s faces. Where were they? Who would care for them? Would they suffer for his crimes. too? He screamed in silent anguish as his legs kept their steady, unyielding march to the east.

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Cast Out

Some People

People.
WICKED! mean.
Two-faced and Evil
nevermore will I
see them as I see friends, I will
view them with
Disrespect.
They can’t be
True.
They must twist
turn
bend
distort
everything I’m
about
for themselves.
Use me as a
plaything.
Nevermore will I
see.
I will
view.
They…
They misuse
my feelings.
Nevermore…
I will not
be used by
Two-faced
Wicked
People.

Some People

A New Son

He didn’t know how long he lay unconscious on the stretcher but when he came to, it was a scene straight from hell. Through the ringing in his ears, he heard cries of pain and anguish from all directions. He looked around for familiar faces, neighbors, co-workers, locals at the pub, but found none. With wracking pains shooting through his body, he managed to stand up amid the chaos to get a better look around. The large tent he found himself in was little more than barely-controlled panic. People lay dead or dying everywhere. Some were so disfigured, they could scarcely be called human beings. He staggered through the tent-flap entrance and found a bench just outside and collapsed into it. Someone in a blood stained hospital gown propped him up and tried to speak to him but his ears were ringing so loudly all he heard was a monotone mumbling. They looked him over quickly, gave him a nod then darted into the tent. The war had finally come to his town. The military has warned that air raids where possible but no one wanted to believe it. Well, they would believe it now. Continue reading “A New Son”

A New Son

Princess of the Park

He took a seat on the park bench close to the oval fountain near the staircase that lead down to the botanical gardens. The day was pleasant and warm with birds and squirrels providing ample entertainment for most folks who came to enjoy a peaceful lunchtime. Nibbling on his sandwich, he sat watching her in almost reverent awe. Even from this distance, she was absolutely radiant. The warm sunlight on her face, the soft glow of her chestnut-amber hair – just one look at her and he forgot about his dreary existence. She was at the far end of the fountain, singing a song of romance and dipping her hands in the water without a care in the world. Continue reading “Princess of the Park”

Princess of the Park

It gets easier as time passes

Ryan rolled into a ball and slowly slouched into a sitting position. His vision was blurry and there was a loud ringing in his ears. The air was crisp and cool, which had a calming, soothing effect on a fleeting headache. As he looked around, he found himself in a featureless room about 10 feet square. The walls, ceiling and floor were pure white and emanating a soft glow allowing him to see clearly but not blinding him.

He made an attempt to stand but quickly flopped down. His muscles just didn’t want to respond. Content to simply sit there and recuperate for a bit, he busied himself with checking for injuries – cuts, bruises, broken bones. As the ringing in his ears faded, he could make out some kind of noise. Over the minutes, he could make out voices, like being in a crowded bar, all jumbled together, talking, laughing, singing, but all a mumble.

Hello Ryan.

“Who is that?” he said, startled and looking around. “Where are you? Where am I?”

You died. Welcome to the first day of the rest of your life.

It gets easier as time passes

Broken

Tears rolled down her cheeks as her lower lip quivered. “But you promised,” she said.

“I’m so sorry, honey,” he whispered. He had built up his daughter’s hopes for weeks and now he had just dashed them to pieces. Children didn’t understand the complexities of adult life, they only understood a promise given, a promise fulfilled and a promise broken.

The Victorian porcelain doll he got for her when she was 3 slid from her grasp, the head shattering as it hit the floor. A promise broken, a dream crushed, an heirloom destroyed and two broken hearts – it was more than he could bear. He didn’t try to stop the tears as he slowly turned around and started to walk away.

Author’s Note:

This was originally written several years ago at ficly.com.

Broken

A Cleansing Fog

With each passing mile, the fog grew steadily thicker. He was used to this, that’s why he opted for the fog lights on his sporty, 2-seater BMW Z4 when he drove it off the lot two years ago. After another ten minutes of driving, however, the fog was almost too thick even for the extra illumination. He dropped his speed a bit from Bat Out of Hell to plain old Maniac and, adjusting his seat, geared himself up for what could turn out to be a very hard rest-of-the-trip.

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A Cleansing Fog